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  • Regulus Black
  • Amycus Carrow
  • Vincent Crabbe
  • Barty Crouch Junior (to Harry when he's excited LV is back)
  • Barty Crouch Senior (to Harry when battling the Imperius Curse)
  • Unnamed Death Eater guarding Hogsmeade
  • Albus Dumbledore (when talking to Severus Snape)
  • Hermione Granger (pretending to be Bellatrix Lestrange)
  • Igor Karkaroff
  • Bellatrix Lestrange
  • Draco Malfoy
  • Lucius Malfoy
  • Narcissa Malfoy
  • Minerva McGonagall
  • Phineas Nigellus
  • Garrick Ollivander
  • Peter Pettigrew (when talking to Sirius)
  • Tom Riddle
  • Severus Snape
  • Sybill Trelawney (in prophecy)
  • Ginny Weasley (in Valentine’s song)
  • Dobby
  • Greyback
  • Griphook
  • Kreacher
  • Scabior
Were any of these a surprise? I thought it was interesting that Griphook and Ollivander are on this list.
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Whether you're a meticulous plotter or a discovery writer, it's wise to consider the skills, tools, and settings that your protagonist and his sidekicks will require for the end of the story. Equally important is understanding the role of the antagonists/contagonists/antagonistic force, and when their plans should be introduced.

Since we've all read it, let's delve into the world of Harry Potter to illustrate these concepts. I'm doing a re-read right now, and am partway through CoS. I found that the majority of what Harry, Ron and Hermione need for a book's climax is foreshadowed within the same book. It is unlikely that Rowling "forgot" about these elements in earlier books; rather, she strategically incorporated foreshadowing and breadcrumbs to satisfy the casual reader's desire for a cohesive story arc. This approach allows readers to make connections, anticipate developments, and feel rewarded when their observations and predictions align with the narrative. Or, if you're a bit slow like me, to feel rewarded upon subsequent re-read. Whilst there are a few exceptions such as the diadem hiding place in book 6, Slytherin's locket in book 5, the rest are little Easter eggs such as the vanishing cabinet and Draco's murderous necklace cropping up in book 2.

Introduction Conclusion
The Ministry always wants Dumbledore’s advice - CH5 The Ministry calls Dumbledore away - CH16
HP visits Gringotts in CH5, we learn of break-in in CH6 In CH8, HP learns it was the same day he was in London
Nicolas Flamel is revealed on Choc Frog card - CH6 Neville gives HP the same card - CH13
Ron says Bertie Bott’s beans can be grim - CH6 Dumbledore eats an earwax bean - CH17
Ron tells HP that Charlie studies dragons in CH6, in CH8 Hagrid and Ron discuss this again in case we forgot. CH14 we get rid of Norbert via Charlie
Fred and George offer to post Ginny a toilet seat - CH6 Fred and George gift HP a toilet seat - CH17
Slytherin have won the House Cup 6 years running - CH7 Gryffindor win the Cup - CH17
Quirrell is at the Leaky Cauldron in CH5, and HP’s scar burns when Snape ‘looked past Quirrell’s turban straight into HP’s eyes’ in CH7. Snape threatens Quirrell in CH13 Snape is revealed as the contagonist, and Quirrellmort the antagonist - CH17
‘the third-floor corridor on the right-hand side is out of bounds to everyone who does not wish to die a very painful death’ - CH7 They visit the corridor LOL - CH9
The Forbidden Forest is out of bounds and contains dangerous creatures - CH7 Detention in the Forest - CH15
HP aces his flying lesson - CH9 HP needs to catch the flying key - CH16
Hermione tries to convince Ron and HP not to wander the school - CH9 Neville says the same to them - CH16
We meet a mountain troll - CH10 Quirrell knocked one out - CH16
Wizard’s chess - CH12 Wizard’s chess - CH16
HP gets an Invisibility Cloak - CH12 The trio need it - CH16
HP gets a flute - CH12 The trio need it - CH16
HP finds the Mirror of Erised - CH12 It’s Dumbledore’s Stone trial - CH17

So, whether you choose to meticulously plan your story or embrace the journey of discovery, it is worth considering how elements such as character skills, tools, and settings can be introduced and developed within the same book or fic. Thoughtful foreshadowing and well-placed hints can enhance the reader's engagement and contribute to a fulfilling storytelling experience. And it's super fun to do!

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 I often read in fics an abundance of academic and professional titles and would love to straighten this out. I can’t find an existing HP article about this, but did enjoy this brief LiveJournal post. 

 

First, let’s discuss honorifics in the real world.

 

  • Formal titles include sir, gentleman, ma’am (rhymes with jam if you are addressing Her Late Majesty TQ), madam (NOT madame unless French), dame, lord, lady. 
  • Academic titles include mister, doctor and professor. Mister/Miss/Ms - surgeons. Doctor - holder of a degree such as PhD, MBBS, DPhil. Professor - very hard to get this title. One can have ‘doctor’ or ‘professor’ on UK passports. It’s gonna be the first thing I do on completion of my PhD. In contrast to America, Australia, etc., there are very few professors in hospitals/universities. It is a much bigger deal to be a professor in the kingdom.
  • Finally, the Armed Forces and the police have rank-related honorifics, such as PC Plod/Police Constable Plod.

 

Now let’s look at canon.

 

  • Healer is used in place of Doctor. ‘You – er – haven’t seen Healer Smethwyck, have you?’
  • There is no instance of Minister Fudge, Minister Scrimgeour, Minister Shacklebolt or Minister Thicknesse. ‘President Obama’ is a phrase but ‘Prime Minister Sunak’ is not. Therefore Minister Shacklebolt is probably an Americanism.
  • Similarly there is no instance of Auror Moody, or Auror Anybody
  • There is no instance of Headmaster Dumbledore, Headmaster Snape or Headmaster Anybody. It’s ‘The Headmaster’ or ‘Professor Dumbledore’ or ‘Minerva McGonagall, Deputy Headmistress’
  • Unspeakable is a job title, not a rank. There is no ‘Unspeakable Surname’
  • Master has been addressed in a previous post. Master is a formal way of addressing little boys.
  • There is no Heir Surmame
  • No Obliviator Surname either, which isn’t a surprise as we’ve got no named Obliviators

 

In conclusion, Healer is the only non-standard canonical honorific. Thank you for coming.

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I was wondering in my time travel fic who should receive an O.M. for helping defeat Voldemort, and reviewed canon for the existing recipients. Here are my findings:

  • Damocles Belby: for inventing the Wolfsbane Potion
  • Arcturus Black: First Class, for ‘services to the Ministry’, according to Sirius he gave them a ‘load of gold’, according to Pottermore ‘loaning the Ministry a large amount of gold’
  • Albus Dumbledore: First Class for his defeat of Grindelwald
  • Cornelius Fudge: First Class (according to Pottermore this was ‘self-awarded’)
  • Gilderoy Lockhart: Third Class
  • Peter Pettigrew: First Class
  • Newt Scamander: Second Class (Fantastic Beasts Comic Relief textbook)
  • (Severus Snape is offered a Second or First Class Order of Merlin for helping save the trio and aiding in Sirius’s arrest)
 
Recipients According to Secondary Canon
 
  • Remus Lupin: First Class (Pottermore canon)
  • Minerva McGonagall: First Class (Short Stories From Hogwarts canon) 
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 I’ve encountered the view that the books are not appropriately diverse and, being HP book-mad, I sought to examine the facts. 

 

I began by looking at the 40 named students in Harry’s year:

  • 2 Indians (Patil twins) which is 5% of the year group
  • 2 Black students (Dean and Blaise) - 5%
  • 1 Irish (Seamus) - 2.5%

Then I stopped being lazy and did a ‘census’ of the characters. To answer the question ”Is HP series diverse?”, we need to look at the ethnic diversity of the UK and compare it to the cast within the books.

 

The diversity of the Fantastic Beasts films and the decision to recast Lavender as a white actress are beyond the scope of this post.

 

To set the historical context, the Philosopher's Stone was published in 1997, and is set in 1991-2, and the idea for HP first came in 1990. Therefore, I’ll focus on the 1991 census, which conveniently is the first one to do a proper ethnicity survey.

 

Methods for the Great Britain census

  • Data taken from 1991 census data freely available from: http://casweb.ukdataservice.ac.uk/index.htm
  • All regions within England, Wales, and Scotland were selected. Northern Ireland data were unavailable. 
  • Percentage of the following categories were calculated as a percentage of the ”Total Persons” column: White, Black Caribbean, Black African, Black Other, Indian, Pakistani, Bangladeshi, Chinese, Asian, Other, Persons Born in Ireland. 
  • White and Persons Born in Ireland were combined to one percentage value.
  • Black Caribbean, Black African and Black Other were combined to one percentage value.

 

Methods for the book census

 

Canon definition

  • Mentioned by name in the first 7 HP books

 

Inclusion criteria:  

  • Humans or part-humans alive within 20 years of the events of book 1
  • Mentioned over 12 times in canon

 

Exclusion criteria:

  • Animals
  • Ghosts
  • Centaurs
  • Nagini (the revelation that she’s a woman is FB canon not HP canon)
  • Portraits unless alive within 20 years of the events of book 1

 

Ethnicity assumptions: 

  • All characters are white unless otherwise specified
  • Ethnic assumptions were sometimes based on names alone. I realise this isn’t ideal

 

Results of the Great Britain census

 

White

Black

Indian

Pakistani

Bangladeshi

Chinese

Asian

Other

94.6%

1.6%

1.5%

0.9%

0.3%

0.3%

0.4%

0.5%

 

I feel compelled to write something to accompany this table since you should never present a results section without words. But the table speaks for itself. I realise China is in Asia but this is how the census asked the question.

 

Results of the book census

 

162 characters were included in the census.

 

Of which are black: Angelina Johnson, Blaise Zabini, Dean Thomas, Kingsley Shacklebolt

Cho Chang is assumed to be Chinese. The words ”Chinese” or ”China” (the country) do not appear in canon

The Patil twins are assumed to be Indian. The words ”Indian” or ”India” do not appear in canon

Hassan Mostafa is Egyptian (I have listed him as ”other”)

 

This results in the following table:

 

White

Black

Indian

Pakistani

Bangladeshi

Chinese

Asian

Other

94.4%

3.1%

1.2%

0%

0%

0.6%

0%

0.6%

 

Discussion

  • The percentage of white characters and the British population at the time is comparable.
  • Black characters are slightly overrepresented and it would be nice to have at least one Bangladeshi or Pakistani. There don’t seem to be Muslim characters unless we make a lot of assumptions about Hassan.
  • The book cast as a whole is appropriately diverse for the time and country it is set.
  • However, it would be nice to have more diversity amongst the main characters as opposed to the background characters.

 

I hope you found this blog post interesting and informative, and would be glad to hear your thoughts.


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Dumbledore is constantly saying this in fics. He doesn't have this line in the books, so I widened the net. 

 

Armando Dippet

  • ‘My dear boy,’ said Dippet kindly, ‘I cannot possibly let you stay at school over the summer. Surely you want to go home for the holidays?’
  • ‘Precisely,’ said the Headmaster. ‘My dear boy, you must see how foolish it would be of me to allow you to remain at the castle when term ends. Particularly in the light of the recent tragedy … the death of that poor little girl … You will be safer by far at your orphanage. As a matter of fact, the Ministry of Magic is even now talking about closing the school. We are no nearer locating the – er – source of all this unpleasantness …’

 

 

Elphias Doge

  • ‘My dear boy! Arthur told me you were here, disguised … I am so glad, so honoured!’
  • ‘Oh, please call me Elphias, dear boy.’

 

 

Albus Dumbledore

  • ‘Calm yourself, dear boy, you are a little behind the times,’ said Dumbledore. ‘Quirrell does not have the Stone.’
  • ‘Ah,’ said Dumbledore, smiling still more broadly. ‘That is the question, isn’t it? On the whole, dear boy, I think not.’
  • ‘My dear boy, its remarkable effects were directed only at Voldemort, who had tampered so ill-advisedly with the deepest laws of magic. Only towards him was that wand abnormally powerful. Otherwise it was a wand like any other … though a good one, I am sure,’ Dumbledore finished kindly. 
  • ‘My dear boy, I have no idea. This is, as they say, your party.’ 
  • ‘My dear boy, I do,’ said Dumbledore, while his fellow pictures looked confused and curious. ‘A wise and courageous decision, but no less than I would have expected of you. Does anyone else know where it fell?’
  • ‘Well, then, you must get on and do it, my dear boy,’ said Dumbledore softly.
  • ‘My dear boy, let us have no more pretence about that. If you were going to kill me, you would have done it when you first Disarmed me, you would not have stopped for this pleasant chat about ways and means.’

 

 

Cornelius Fudge

  • ‘Oh, my dear boy, we’re not going to punish you for a little thing like that!’ cried Fudge, waving his crumpet impatiently. ‘It was an accident! We don’t send people to Azkaban just for blowing up their aunts!’

 

 

Rubeus Hagrid

  • Hagrid’s miserable face broke into a wide, watery smile. ‘Tha’s my boy … You show ’em, Harry, you show ’em. Beat ’em all.’

 

 

 

Gilderoy Lockhart

  • ‘My dear boy,’ said Lockhart, straightening up and frowning at Harry. ‘Do use your common sense. My books wouldn’t have sold half as well if people didn’t think I’d done all those things. No one wants to read about some ugly old Armenian warlock, even if he did save a village from werewolves. He’d look dreadful on the front cover. No dress sense at all. And the witch who banished the Bandon Banshee had a hairy chin. I mean, come on …’

 

 

Sir Nicholas de Mimsy-Porpington

  • ‘Harry! My dear boy!’
  • ‘My dear boy! Harry Potter, at my Deathday Party! And,’ he hesitated, looking excited, ‘do you think you could possibly mention to Sir Patrick how very frightening and impressive you find me?’

 

 

Garrick Ollivander

  • ‘My dear boy.’ Ollivander’s voice was feeble. ‘You rescued us. I thought we would die in that place. I can never thank you … never thank you … enough.’

 

 

Tom Riddle

  • ‘Ah, yes, I remember,’ said Voldemort, looking down at Neville, who was struggling back to his feet, unarmed and unprotected, standing in the no-man’s-land between the survivors and the Death Eaters. ‘But you are a pure-blood, aren’t you, my brave boy?’ Voldemort asked Neville, who stood facing him, his empty hands curled in fists.

 

 

Rufus Scrimgeour

  • ‘My dear boy … even Dumbledore cannot return from the –’

 

 

Horace Slughorn

  • ‘Harry, m’boy!’ said Slughorn, jumping up at the sight of him so that his great velvet-covered belly seemed to fill all the remaining space in the compartment. His shiny bald head and great silver moustache gleamed as brightly in the sunlight as the golden buttons on his waistcoat. 
  • ‘Harry, m’boy?’
  • ‘Ah yes, Professor McGonagall did mention … not to worry, my dear boy, not to worry at all. You can use ingredients from the store cupboard today, and I’m sure we can lend you some scales, and we’ve got a small stock of old books here, they’ll do until you can write to Flourish and Blotts …’
  • ‘Harry, m’boy!’ said a booming voice from behind them.
  • ‘Harry, that’s three of my little suppers you’ve missed now!’ said Slughorn, poking him genially in the chest. ‘It won’t do, m’boy, I’m determined to have you! Miss Granger loves them, don’t you?’
  • ‘Harry, m’boy!’ boomed Slughorn, almost as soon as Harry and Luna had squeezed in through the door. ‘Come in, come in, so many people I’d like you to meet!’
  • ‘Ask away, then, m’boy, ask away …’
  • ‘Don’t mention it, m’boy, don’t mention it,’ said Slughorn, as Ron collapsed into a nearby armchair, looking devastated.
  • ‘Euphoria, I take it? And what’s that I smell? Mmmm … you’ve added just a sprig of peppermint, haven’t you? Unorthodox, but what a stroke of inspiration, Harry. Of course, that would tend to counterbalance the occasional side-effects of excessive singing and nose-tweaking … I really don’t know where you get these brainwaves, my boy … unless –’
  • ‘That’s enough!’ said Slughorn suddenly, raising a shaking hand. ‘Really, my dear boy, enough … I’m an old man … I don’t need to hear … I don’t want to hear …’
  • ‘But then … my dear boy … you’re asking a great deal … you’re asking me, in fact, to aid you in your attempt to destroy –’
  • ‘Harry!’ he panted, massaging his immense chest beneath his emerald-green silk pyjamas. ‘My dear boy … what a surprise … Minerva, do please explain … Severus … what …?’

 

 

Hepzibah Smith

  • ‘Lean in a little, dear boy, so you can see … of course, Burke knows I’ve got this one, I bought it from him, and I daresay he’d love to get it back when I’m gone …’

 

 

Sybill Trelawney 

  • ‘My dear boy – my poor dear boy – no – it is kinder not to say – no – don’t ask me …’
  • ‘The Grim, my dear, the Grim!’ cried Professor Trelawney, who looked shocked that Harry hadn’t understood. ‘The giant, spectral dog that haunts churchyards! My dear boy, it is an omen – the worst omen – of death!’
  • ‘Indeed!’ whispered Professor Trelawney, scribbling keenly on the parchment perched upon her knees. ‘My boy, you may well be seeing the outcome of poor Hagrid’s trouble with the Ministry of Magic! Look closer … does the Hippogriff appear to … have its head?’
  • ‘I’m so sorry, dear boy,’ she said dreamily. ‘The heat of the day, you know … I drifted off for a moment …’
  • ‘My dear boy!’ she said in a very carrying whisper. ‘The rumours! The stories! The Chosen One! Of course, I have known for a very long time … the omens were never good, Harry … but why have you not returned to Divination? For you, of all people, the subject is of the utmost importance!’

 

 

Fred Weasley

  • ‘Harry!’ said Fred, elbowing Percy out of the way and bowing deeply. ‘Simply splendid to see you, old boy –’

 

 

Oliver Wood

  • ‘That’s my boy!’ Wood kept yelling. Alicia, Angelina and Katie had all kissed Harry, and Fred had him in a grip so tight Harry felt as though his head would come off. In complete disarray, the team managed to make its way back to the ground. Harry got off his broom and looked up to see a gaggle of Gryffindor supporters sprinting onto the pitch, Ron in the lead. Before he knew it, he had been engulfed by the cheering crowd.

 

 

Eldred Worple

  • ‘Just as modest as Horace described!’ said Worple. ‘But seriously –’ his manner changed; it became suddenly businesslike, ‘I would be delighted to write it myself – people are craving to know more about you, dear boy, craving! If you were prepared to grant me a few interviews, say in four- or five-hour sessions, why, we could have the book finished within months. And all with very little effort on your part, I assure you – ask Sanguini here if it isn’t quite – Sanguini, stay here!’ added Worple, suddenly stern, for the vampire had been edging towards the nearby group of girls, a rather hungry look in his eye. ‘Here, have a pasty,’ said Worple, seizing one from a passing elf and stuffing it into Sanguini’s hand before turning his attention back to Harry.
  • ‘My dear boy, the gold you could make, you have no idea –’
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In canon, Severus Snape is often referred to as a ‘Potions master’. Does this title mean he’s a Master of Potions, has a Master’s degree, or is world-class? I’m going to argue ‘no’, brilliant though he is. 

 

First, let’s have a look at the books.

 

  • (Professor Slughorn is referred to as Potions master several times)
  • The tiny little Charms master was bobbing his way towards them and Hermione was the only one who had managed to turn vinegar into wine; her glass flask was full of deep crimson liquid, whereas the contents of Harry’s and Ron’s were still murky brown. 
  • ‘is a former colleague of mine who has agreed to resume his old post of Potions master.’ (Implying it’s a job title. If you had a Potions Mastery, that wouldn’t end in retirement)
  • by Rita Skeeter, bestselling author of Armando Dippet: Master or Moron?
  • ‘Professor,’ Harry said, approaching the little Charms master, ‘Professor, I’m sorry to interrupt, but this is important.’
  • ‘Excuse me,’ said Snape icily, ‘but I believe I am the Potions master at this school.’
  • ‘Professor Severus Snape, master of this school, commands you to yield the information you conceal!’ Snape said, hitting the map with his wand.

 

So you don’t have to take my word for it, let’s look at random stuff I found online showing that ‘master’ is an old-fashioned job title in the UK

 

  • Alan Rickman: "I think at heart Snape is basically quite an insecure person, he’s always longing to be something else that people will really respect like a black magician not just a school master. That's why he envies the more popular and successful boys like Harry. He does have a positive side though, even though Harry's a thorn in his side he doesn't let it worry him too much." 
  • taught by my prep school science master. 
  • The teachers – called masters in those days – all had their own tics, peculiarities, accents and distinguishing features that we pupils studied intently
  • On 19th February 1940, 182 boys and 12 masters arrived at Kennylands Camp. They were part of a national scheme to set up camps in several places away from the danger of living in large cities which were the target of Nazi bombers.
  • served as Senior History Master at Hull Grammar School for Boys
  • was promoted from Senior Master to Third Deputy, with special responsibility for assisting the Headmaster in control and management of the school budget, in liaison with the School Governors.
  • the raising of £20,000 by parents, masters, boys, Old Boys and friends of the school so that the three-hundredth anniversary might be fittingly celebrated.
  • can hardly have been a suitable building for what were virtually three separate establishments; those of the Master, the Matron and the Boys
  • Discipline was a very real problem for the Masters 
  • Ultimately, however, a master will be judged by his effectiveness in the classroom
  • This widening of the syllabus would throw an added burden on the Master and the committee decided that an Assistant Master should be engaged
  • Mr. Crofts’s constant complaint in the early years of his mastership was the poor quality of many of the boys he had to teach

 

And I’ll end with a quote from madasafish: ‘He will certainly not, as occasionally seen in fan fiction, be addressed as "Master Snape" since in British English that is an old-fashioned, formal way of addressing a very small male child who is too young to be called "Mister Snape”.’

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If you’ve ever wanted a list of nightwear in Harry Potter (LOL) I can deliver:


Archie Aymslowe

GoF: Ludo Bagman was easily the most noticeable person Harry had seen so far, even including old Archie in his flowered nightdress.

 

Moody!Barty Crouch

GoF: Snape stopped talking very abruptly. He and Filch both looked down at the foot of the stairs. Harry saw Mad-Eye Moody limp into sight through the narrow gap between their heads. Moody was wearing his old travelling cloak over his nightshirt and leaning on his staff as usual.

 

Albus Dumbledore

CoS: Next moment, Dumbledore was backing into the dormitory, wearing a long woolly dressing gown and a nightcap. He was carrying one end of what looked like a statue. Professor McGonagall appeared a second later, carrying its feet. Together, they heaved it onto a bed.

OotP: Dumbledore was sitting in a high-backed chair behind his desk; he leaned forward into the pool of candlelight illuminating the papers laid out before him. He was wearing a magnificently embroidered purple and gold dressing gown over a snowy white nightshirt, but seemed wide-awake, his penetrating light blue eyes fixed intently upon Professor McGonagall.



Dudley Dursley

HBP: Dudley had that moment peered round the living room door. His large, blond head rising out of the stripy collar of his pyjamas looked oddly disembodied, his mouth gaping in astonishment and fear. Dumbledore waited a moment or two, apparently to see whether any of the Dursleys were going to say anything, but as the silence stretched on he smiled.

 

Petunia Dursley

HBP: The kitchen door had opened, and there stood Harry’s aunt, wearing rubber gloves and a housecoat over her nightdress, clearly halfway through her usual pre- bedtime wipe-down of all the kitchen surfaces. Her rather horsey face registered nothing but shock.

 

Vernon Dursley

HBP: Vernon Dursley, whose moustache was quite as bushy as Dumbledore’s, though black, and who was wearing a puce dressing gown, was staring at the visitor as though he could not believe his tiny eyes.

 

Lily Evans

DH: It was nighttime. Lily, who was wearing a dressing gown, stood with her arms folded in front of the portrait of the Fat Lady, at the entrance to Gryffindor Tower.

 

Argus Filch

GoF: sick with apprehension, he watched Filch drawing nearer and nearer in his old flannel dressing-gown – he tried desperately to pull his trapped leg free, but it merely sank a few more inches – any second now, Filch was going to spot the map or walk right into him –

 

Cornelius Fudge

OotP: “I know, Williamson, I know, I saw him too!” gibbered Fudge, who was wearing pyjamas under his pinstriped cloak and was gasping as though he had just run miles. “Merlin’s beard — here — here! — in the Ministry of Magic! — great heavens above — it doesn’t seem possible — my word — how can this be?”

 

Gilderoy Lockhart

OotP: Their ex-Defence Against the Dark Arts teacher pushed open the doors and moved towards them, wearing a long lilac dressing gown.

 

Alice Longbottom

OotP: Neville’s mother had come edging down the ward in her nightdress.

 

Xenophilius Lovegood

DH: Barely ten seconds passed, then the door was flung open and there stood Xenophilius Lovegood, barefoot and wearing what appeared to be a stained nightshirt. His long, white, candyfloss hair was dirty and unkempt. Xenophilius had been positively dapper at Bill and Fleur’s wedding by comparison.

 

Minerva McGonagall

PoA: The Gryffindor party ended only when Professor McGonagall turned up in her tartan dressing gown and hair net at one in the morning, to insist that they all go to bed. Harry and Ron climbed the stairs to their dormitory, still discussing the match.

OotP: Professor McGonagall came hurrying into the dormitory in her tartan dressing gown, her glasses perched lopsidedly on the bridge of her bony nose.

DH: “Oh, are we allowed to say the name now?” asked Luna with an air of interest, pulling off the Invisibility Cloak. This appearance of a second outlaw seemed to overwhelm Professor McGonagall, who staggered backward and fell into a nearby chair, clutching at the neck of her old tartan dressing gown.

DH: Along the corridors they raced, and one by one the Patronuses left them; Professor McGonagall’s tartan dressing gown rustled over the floor, and Harry and Luna jogged behind her under the Cloak.

 

Poppy Pomfrey

CoS: “Get Madam Pomfrey,” whispered Dumbledore, and Professor McGonagall hurried past the end of Harry’s bed out of sight. Harry lay quite still, pretending to be asleep. He heard urgent voices, and then Professor McGonagall swept back into view, closely followed by Madam Pomfrey, who was pulling a cardigan on over her nightdress. He heard a sharp intake of breath.

HBP: After a while Madam Pomfrey came out of her office, this time wearing a thick dressing gown.

 

Harry Potter

GoF: Then, when the deep pool was full of hot water, foam, and bubbles, which took a very short time considering its size, Harry turned off all the taps, pulled off his pyjamas, slippers, and dressing gown, and slid into the water.

Baby!Harry, DH: They had not drawn the curtains; he saw them quite clearly in their little sitting room, the tall black-haired man in his glasses, making puffs of coloured smoke erupt from his wand for the amusement of the small black-haired boy in his blue pyjamas. The child was laughing and trying to catch the smoke, to grab it in his small fist. ...

 

Mrs Roberts

GoF: The floating people were suddenly illuminated as they passed over a burning tent, and Harry recognised one of them – Mr Roberts, the campsite manager. The other three looked as though they might be his wife and children. One of the marchers below flipped Mrs Roberts upside-down with his wand; her nightdress fell down to reveal voluminous drawers; she struggled to cover herself up as the crowd below her screeched and hooted with glee.

 

Madam Rosmerta

HBP: His heart leapt: somebody had seen, somebody knew they needed help – and looking around he saw Madam Rosmerta scurrying down the dark street towards them on high-heeled, fluffy slippers, wearing a silk dressing-gown embroidered with dragons.

 

Horace Slughorn

HBP: Harry had been slightly worried that Slughorn might be at breakfast, but he answered his office door at the first knock, wearing a green velvet dressing gown and matching nightcap and looking rather bleary-eyed.

DH: “Harry!” he panted, massaging his immense chest beneath his emerald-green silk pyjamas. “My dear boy ... what a surprise ... Minerva, do please explain. ... Severus ... what ... ?”

 

Severus Snape

GoF: Filch stopped a few steps below Harry and turned. At the foot of the stairs stood the only person who could make Harry’s situation worse: Snape. He was wearing a long grey nightshirt and he looked livid.

 

Crowds of Students

DH: They parted at the top of the next staircase, Harry and Luna running back toward the concealed entrance to the Room of Requirement. As they ran, they met crowds of students, most wearing travelling cloaks over their pyjamas, being shepherded down to the Great Hall by teachers and prefects.

 

Dean Thomas

OotP: “Hey, Harry,” said Dean, who was putting on a pair of pyjamas in the West Ham colours. “Good holiday?”

 

Tom the Barman

PoA: Tom the innkeeper reappeared, wearing an apron over his nightshirt and bearing a tray of tea and crumpets. He placed the tray on a table between Fudge and Harry and left the parlour, closing the door behind him.

 

Arthur Weasley

OotP: The kitchen door opened and the entire Weasley family, plus Hermione, came inside, all looking very happy, with Mr Weasley walking proudly in their midst dressed in a pair of striped pyjamas covered by a mackintosh.

OotP: Mrs Weasley did not seem entirely satisfied with Mr Weasley’s answer. As her husband leaned over to shake Harry’s hand, she peered at the bandaging under his nightshirt.

 

Ginny Weasley

CoS: At that moment there was a diversion in the form of a small, red-headed figure in a long nightdress, who appeared in the kitchen, gave a small squeal, and ran out again.

 

Molly Weasley

OotP: All were fully dressed except Mrs Weasley, who was wearing a quilted purple dressing gown. She leapt to her feet the moment Harry entered.

HBP: There stood Mrs Weasley, short, plump and wearing an old green dressing-gown.

 

Ron Weasley

PS: Harry stepped aside, but with Ron in front of the mirror, he couldn’t see his family any more, just Ron in his paisley pyjamas.

GoF: Dressed in his maroon paisley pyjamas, Ron stopped dead facing Harry across the room, and looked around.

GoF: He strode across the room towards the stairs; he half expected Ron to stop him, he would even have liked Ron to throw a punch at him, but Ron just stood there in his too small pyjamas, and Harry, having stormed upstairs, lay awake in bed fuming for a long time afterwards, and didn’t hear him come up to bed.

OotP: “We can’t let them out to hunt every night,” Ron explained as he pulled on his maroon pyjamas.

OotP: “Ron, I’ll have to get you more pyjamas, these are at least six inches too short, I can’t believe how fast you’re growing ... what colour would you like?”

DH: “I still haven’t ruled it out,” came Hermione’s muffled voice from beneath her blankets, but Harry saw Ron smiling slightly as he pulled his maroon pyjamas out of his rucksack.

 

 

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I'm often screenshotting my spreadsheet of names and it's just easier if I make it a public blog.

These are the characters in Harry's year at Hogwarts, less Crabbe cos he died. Alphabetical order cos I was seeing how to wangle Harry and Malfoy sharing a dormitory.

Lavender is not canonically dead! Some name are from the sorting ceremony, some are from JKR's original 40, a handwritten list. Tracey is a girl. 

Any questions just ask!


Abbott, Hannah
Bones, Susan
Boot, Terry
Brocklehurst, Mandy
Brown, Lavender
Bulstrode, Millicent
Corner, Michael
Cornfoot, Stephen
Crabbe, Vincent - EDIT. Crabbe is dead. Goyle is alive
Davis, Tracey
Entwhistle, Kevin
Finch-Fletchley, Justin
Finnigan, Seamus
Goldstein, Anthony
Goyle, Gregory
Granger, Hermione
Greengrass, Daphne
Hopkins, Wayne
Jones, Megan
Li, Sue
Longbottom, Neville
MacDougal, Morag
Macmillan, Ernest
Malfoy, Draco
Malone, Roger
Moon, Lily
Nott, Theodore
Parkinson, Pansy
Patil, Padma
Patil, Parvati
Perks, Sally-Anne
Potter, Harry
Rivers, Oliver
Roper, Sophie
Runcorn, unknown gal
Smith, Sally
Smith, Zacharias
Thomas, Dean
Turpin, Lisa
Weasley, Ronald
Zabini, Blaise


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Or: why I don't like Tempus

  • Angelina Johnson (book 5)
  • Basil’s colleague (“holding a large gold watch”) at the Quidditch World Cup
  • Dedalus Diggle “an immense pocket watch” – book 7
  • Dudley “gold wristwatch” “lighted dial”
  • Fred (book 5)
  • Fred or George (book 1)
  • Fudge (large gold pocket watch dangling from his waistcoat)
  • Harry (book 2-4, 5, 6, 7) in book 1 he ‘wishes he had a watch’. After 2nd task in book 4 it had stopped working. He wears it for a while even though it’s broken then he ‘discards’ it. In book 5 he isn’t wearing his watch after Mr Weasley was attacked by Nagini. In book 7 his watch is “very much like” the one Ron got his for 17th. Gold with stars encircling the face. Dent on the back. Fabian Prewett’s. Dented on the back.
  • Hermione (book 3, 4, 5, 7)
  • Montague (book 5)
  • Mr Weasley (book 2, 4, 5) in 4 he “pulls out” his watch so it's prob a pocket watch
  • Mrs Weasley (book 4, 6, 7)
  • Pansy Parkinson (book 4 - Niffler tries to bite it off)
  • People waiting for the Goblet of Fire to spew out more names
  • Prof Dumbledore – “a golden watch” “It had twelve hands but no numbers; instead, little planets were moving around the edge” (book 1, 3, 5)
  • Professor Lupin (book 5)
  • Ron (book 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7) in book 6 when he gets a new one it is “a heavy gold watch with odd symbols around the edge and tiny moving stars instead of hands”
  • Tonks (book 5)
  • Uncle Vernon (book 3)
  • Yaxley (book 7)
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I spent hours making up names for those in Severus's year for a time travel fic I have yet to write. I've sent this list to a few people, but I may as well make it a public resource for those who have use of it.

There's nothing worse when writing than to have to stop to look up appropriate UK-sounding 70s names!

I've included a spread of England, Scotland, Ireland and Wales, wizardy names and characters of Ghanaian and Indian descent. I used the Office for National Statistics data to look at the most common names in 1960, as these characters were born Q4 1959Q3 1960. In 1966, 2% of the UK population were of "New Commonwealth and Pakistan origin". Off the top of my head it wasn't until 1980 that the govt started collecting ethnic information in the census, and that's how we know that Harry's year group, born in 1980, matches the ethnic diversity of Muggle Britain in 1980.


Slytherin girls: Sadie Flint, Wendy Burke, Jayne Wilkes, Penny Fawley, Cadwyn Fuller
Slytherin boys: Jeremy Mulciber, Hugh Avery, Severus Snape, Gawain Williams, Christopher Stevenson

Gryffindor girls: Lily Evans, Sarah Pontefract, Jill Campbell, Angela Midgen, Claire Morrison
Gryffindor boys: James Potter, Remus Lupin, Sirius Black, Peter Pettigrew, Lancel Robertson

Huff girls: Tanwen Fowler, Vanessa Watson, Greta Catchlove, Miriam Misselthwaite, Niamh O’Brien
Huff boys: Derek Stebbins, Charles Ofori, Craig Blythe, Johnathan Shipley, Terence Turner

Ravenclaw girls: Euodias McKinnon, Yasmeen Singh, Tania Whittaker, Veronica King, Suzanne Ollerton
Ravenclaw boys: John Highgate, Walter McClivert, Brian Clark, Neil Mitchell, Thomas Youngfoot


How canon compliant is this list?

I am glad you asked! :D

We know Wilkes is a Death Eater but don't know their sex, so in the interests of fairness I made her a girl. It is sensible to say Avery and Mulciber are in Severus's year, judging by what Lily said in Severus's Pensieve memory. We don't know whether other Death Eaters mentioned in canon are in his year. We know of Marlene McKinnon—she died in 1981 and people like to ship her with Sirius—but odds are she's older. You'll see I've given her a younger sister, Euodias. (It's unlikely that all who are vaguely Severus's age ARE in fact Severus's age). We know Greta Catchlove, author of Charm Your Own Cheese, was born in 1960. And that's all we know.

EDIT changed Terence Cresswell to Terry Turner, because Dirk Cresswell was Muggle-born.
EDIT Derek Johnson is now Derek Stebbins because:

  ‘Quills down, please!’ squeaked Professor Flitwick. ‘That means you too, Stebbins! Please remain seated while I collect your parchment! Accio!